Well my feedback was unexpectedly positive, however I have heaps to work on. I need to re-look at my images and try some ‘dodging and burning’ in places so I think I might need to google some tutorials on this as I have limited use in Photoshop! I also need to reference more information sources to improve on the quality of my written work.
I think perseverance has paid off.
I have acquired Media, Identity and Gender: An Introduction by David Gauntlett so hopefully I can add to my written work and perhaps explain my point better.
Wendy Rose Context & Narrative 