I had worked hard on researching my image, or so I had thought, which is why I was a little disappointed by my feedback.
Overall it was very good, positive feedback but I am still not quite getting there with the academic research. I think (hope) this will improve with practice, I had focused on researching what I could see in the image and the context surrounding when the photo was taken and events in history. I did not look to other practitioners of the time or academic writers on the same subject?
Wendy Rose Context & Narrative 